......i take offense to that be honest. it is good but it is inferior to fallout equestria ultimately in execution. especially at the latter half to the point of............... oooh the pain, it just abandons one of the seris more powerful themes. by making it tht a mastermind is behind the end, it just takes the impact of this world and stabs it till its dead. the ruined earth that they stride upon has someone to blame for it being that way in this case.......... and before, there is no one beign who came be blamed, can be placed on trial and killed as repentance. not fluttershy, not luna, not twilight, and not some implanted for the fic character. everyone is to blame, yet no one can be blamed. that is a power far beyond a mastermind. instead of some evil puppetmaster, we have the worse possible thing happen; those with good intention opening the portal to hell.
that and about ninety character assassinations that makes me want to charge somber with political homicide. celestia, twilight, rarity, now fucking luna? if you removed nearlly all this uneeded, useless filler ina failed attempts to one up the original story, it is still the same story. a better story in fact. with what happens with luna, it has gone too far and fell backwards waaaay on my rating scale. making her that way, that wicked........... unnecessary to the extreme and shows ignorance i would damn argue. that is evil, not misguided. not to mention utterly ignoring like all of her experiences as nightmare moon and what happened. you can hve her escalate, but there is no need for hitler.